Well, I think you deserve this kind of feedback I'm gonna write you something about it.

This came up very very well, I've always loved your style and this isn't the exception. I really like the perspective you did here, for me it looks great!

And about the concept, despite I don't know the character I like the way you drew him, overall due to your colouring and background, softer and very well done. I'm sure you'll improve even more in your colouring.

Finally, I can say the text gives it a nice touch, I don't see those kind of things often.

So yea, you're doing a great work so far, keep up sis!